Take a look at my poem please.?

I dedicate to someone who i couldn't figure what she is, i cannot express what's happening or what happened with me during the past 3 years , she's someone id die for but yet she cannot love me back it's hard for me to accept that fact , now she's gone i cant forget about her we share same friends god doesnt want me to forget about her. this is for you E.


there is a garden in my heart
more beautiful than words
Filled with subtle scents and shades
and the rhapsodies of birds
i go there to refill my cup
or when i am alone
to find my favorite rock and trace
the smile upon the stone
when the wind blows in my heart,
stirring up the sea
i turn my back upon the waves
and return to me.
i sit beside a quiet pool
and gaze down at the sky
and feel a yearning so complete
i cannot help but cry.
i'm still the one calling for you
i was in your life history yesterday
with my heart and longing for you
and people saw me while i was wandering
and hiding inside me
calling for you to come if you can hear me.
embrace me with the warmth of your eyes
delight me and tell me you're coming back
make my world sweet my darling my heart needs you
i am still the one calling for you
you've increased my torment in your absence
the separation has an end
i made you swar you'd come my eye
why are you forgetting me?
why are you like this?
may you forever be be before my eyes
that would be enough
to satisfy me





Answer :
i wrote this poem about my cat Jay.

Jay baby Jay bay,
Jay bay baby Jay,.
Why you love chicken,
Hooo my baby Jay,

You sit by the range,
Acting so strange,
I know your waiting for,
The oven door,
Sure your always looking for more.

I think i have a talent.:)





Answer :
it's great! really sort of inspiring...

what do you think of mine 1? please jus have a look
http://uk.answers.yahoo.com/question/ind…
it's sort of double meaning...i think i'll call it Rose-her but don't know yet...do you think that's a good title for it..??
:-)





Answer :
I loved it it realli got me into how you were feeling Deep thoughts....your a realli good poe look at mine to plz..its not as good as yours but i just wanna kno